Peers revision

       What i got out of the peer revision process is that we do help each other on our mistakes in our essays. And it was a big help to us all. We may have recognized errors that our peers didn't notice. I had learned to make my writing more exciting to get my audience attention. Its a great process because we helped each other in many ways and with different errors. Also when we read our papers out loud we can really hear how it sounds and do it flow right the way that we want. It will be more valuable to me because i will use this process more. I will encourage my friends, family and classmates to use this process for their essays and speeches.

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